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Patricia
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0 posted 2003-05-05 01:04 PM


I Wish My Love

I wish my love would pick for me a colorful bouquet,
And its sweet aroma would linger through the day.

I wish my love would pledge his devotion faithfully,
And whisper ever so softly in my ear I am his destiny.

I wish my love would recite verse of sweet romance,
And we spend the evening entangled in a lover’s dance.

I wish my love would devour me in passion and desire
And take us to a place in which we could go no higher.

I wish my love would sing for me a sleepy lullaby
And caress my face as we bid our night goodbye.

I wish my love would hold me through the dark night,
And prove his love still shines in the morning’s light.

Alas, my love hath giveth me this and so much more.
Together to heights seldom reached we often soar.
But it is only in my daydreams my love I doth find.
For you see, my love lives for me only in my mind.



[This message has been edited by Patricia (05-05-2003 05:38 PM).]

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-05-05 01:08 PM


Very nice!
Zaynab
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2 posted 2003-05-05 01:21 PM


All things come to those who wait. You just have to hope the wait doesn't kill you first!

I'll save my next star for you!

Zaynab
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Kill me tonight and I will love again
Leave me to live and I live in pain
Leave me no love and I live in vain
Kill me tonight and kill the pain

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3 posted 2003-05-05 01:29 PM




Pat,

And such a fine daydream it is. May all your dreams come true.


Hugs, Pat


Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-05-05 01:44 PM


Patricia
Ya Know I feel the same way. So there are others. Wonderful write.

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-05-05 04:27 PM


Patricia, I pray that all your daydreams
plus more comes true for you very soon.
I love the way you rhyme, Lady.
Hugs,
Ethel

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-05-05 05:06 PM


Very nice...enjoyed...James
Bill Charles
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7 posted 2003-05-05 05:11 PM


Patricia - for what you wish would perhaps come to you...

BC

Margherita
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8 posted 2003-05-05 05:21 PM


That's really lovely! When reality is not satisfying, dreams keep us going. And who knows they might even manifest ... meanwhile they have healing effects.
Love, Margherita

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9 posted 2003-05-05 06:33 PM


enjoyed
rosepetals25
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10 posted 2003-05-05 06:35 PM


I liked   Those daydreams will come one day I'm sure

Tara

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11 posted 2003-05-05 06:35 PM


And such a lovely daydream it is Patricia!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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