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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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if tears could have been hidden under wraps of false smiles like dust buried under carpets and rugs filled with designer patterns covered by style they would have been but no, I am not succeeding I am spraying my tears splashing them around there is no victory and the thorns of the roses I gave you are hurting me still and my palms are coloured in the red of bricks for now, I am in suffer maybe one day the big vessel will empty itself and there shall be no more tears for dry rivers don’t run and empty hearts don’t beat they just lie in conceal like camouflaging iguanas giving joy to visitors of the zoo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, This is so deep I had to dig a hole to uncover it. But I enjoyed the dig. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
if tears could have been hidden under wraps of false smiles like dust buried under carpets and rugs filled with designer patterns My goodness my smiling friend, this is a very heartfelt write. Sad, but awesome just the same. Me thinks it should be in my library!! Hope you are well. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Zaynab Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 59Kuwait |
beautiful poem, your use of description is lovely, I can picture it now... Well done Zaynab Kill me tonight and I will love again |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sudhir, Always like seeing your name for I know there will be another fine poem. Love your writing. This one, very heartfelt and can apply to many a situation. Thanks for the opportunity to read you. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just one of those days, huh?  M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SudhirMyFriend~ Just one big WOW of understanding~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I wonder if it's ok to feed the bears. . . well done, my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sudhir~ Yes, I, too understand...and am in awe of it's depth...you've come a long way in your writing and I am saving this. GAWD I relate and even at that, I could have never expressed it as phenomenally as you have. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
for dry rivers don’t run and empty hearts don’t beat they just lie in conceal This reads like a healing ache... marking the scar~ Such a nice pen you have Sudhir~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
My dear friends, I thank you from the deepest bottom of my heart for coming by, reading and understanding the scraps... Regards, Sudhir |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I so much enjoyed this write, thank you |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a lot, my friend... regards, sudhir |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Heartfelt penned! ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks my friend... regards, sudhir |
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