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vandana
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0 posted 2003-05-05 09:53 AM



If I ever wanted you
I know
My heart will be crying
out for you
You would ever dream of me
you would hear me cry
I try
To hold you
You would have come
And hold me
When we dance and
I fall
Would you caught me
In your arms
If I ever wanted you
I know
my heart will call on you
you would hear my heartbeat
If I am wrong to love you
If i know
You are right person for me
I will be happy
Do anything for you
When nights falls
would you kiss me goodnight
All day and night
If I ever wanted you
I would wanted more


[This message has been edited by vandana (05-05-2003 10:45 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-05-05 10:33 AM



It's surprising what
the heart hears, isn't it,
Vandana?

Thank you for sharing yours...

Justbleu
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2 posted 2003-05-05 11:16 AM


Lovely thoughts.....
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-05-05 12:44 PM


very deep and touching write...I always enjoy hearing what is in your heart vandana
regards2you
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4 posted 2003-05-05 12:59 PM




Vandana,


'If I Ever Wanted You', the title alone is heart touching...as is the poem.


Hugs, Pat


marcel
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5 posted 2003-05-05 01:03 PM


very interesting and creative piece--heartfelt and heartunderstood
NewEnglandlazurlu
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6 posted 2003-05-05 02:41 PM


This is very special. Enjoyed.  

Huggles, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-05-05 04:59 PM


Enjoyed...James
Magnus
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8 posted 2003-05-05 05:02 PM


I agree V.  thanx for sharing your heart with
each of us here...much enjoyed...

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2003-05-05 05:18 PM


You deserve to have your heart's desire fulfilled!

Warm hugs,
Linda

rosepetals25
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10 posted 2003-05-05 06:36 PM


I really liked this

Tara

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11 posted 2003-05-05 06:38 PM


Very nicely written Vandana!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

nakdthoughts
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12 posted 2003-05-05 06:40 PM


great title, nice thoughts, vandana

*s
M

Bill Charles
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13 posted 2003-05-05 08:52 PM


vandana - your heart speaks well...

BC

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14 posted 2003-05-05 09:12 PM


wonderful my friend. . .

great work. . .

----------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

ThisDiamond
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15 posted 2003-05-06 10:09 AM


Enjoyed the lush of love here.
TD

garysgirl
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16 posted 2003-05-06 10:12 AM


Vandana, thank you for sharing your heart love
with us. I enjoyed reading it.  
Hugs  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-06-2003 10:12 AM).]

Sudhir Iyer
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17 posted 2003-05-06 10:38 AM


If I ever wanted you
I would wanted more
........

lovely... most enjoyed...

regards,
sudhir

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18 posted 2003-05-06 05:09 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Vandana, I believe we all have these heartfelt feeling, dearest friend, I too long for my dream girl ever so much and it makes me cry longing for her but know that your love thinks the same way and soon you will finally get what you want! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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