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Open Poetry #26

To touch, feel and share

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

0 posted 2003-05-05 08:49 AM

To touch a face of utter grace
Of beauty’s cast and making
To be at one with God and son
Does leave the heart near breaking

To feel once whole with mind and soul
In moments time or hour
Does feed the seed of want and need
To bud with peace and flower

To share some time with word and rhyme
To ponder thought and way
Does offer free to world from me
The things that fill my day

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

1 posted 2003-05-05 11:24 AM

Very nice....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-05-05 12:42 PM

awesome! what a fine rhyme scheme! flowed just like a river, through my heart

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-05-05 01:03 PM

nicely done

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

4 posted 2003-05-06 08:31 AM

Hi Bridgette, thanks for the reply, always appreciated.

passing shadows, hello again, thanks for the reply and comments they were great and are always heart felt.

Brad Majors, nice to see you here, thank you for the reply and comment.

To you all, thank you again, stay well and keep the pen working.

Sincerely
Rick

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