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CountryGal
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since 2003-03-09
Posts 24
Missouri, USA

0 posted 2003-05-05 07:23 AM


Starry Night

The night sky is clear and bright
With the moon and the stars shining bright
As I look up at them I start to wonder
If you might be looking up at that same time I ponder

It makes my heart start to dance
Thinking about that kind of romance
How I would love to look at them in your arms
I would never feel any harm

I would feel like I was in heaven
Just laying there with you looking up at heaven
And I would look up at the stars to make a wish
Just to have this last and get a kiss

But you are so far away from me
So all I can do is sit here and dream
That maybe one day it could be
Under a starry sky just you and me

If you are looking up at the heavens right now
Look at that star that is the brightest right now
That is the one I'm looking at too
Just looking there and thinking of you

© Copyright 2003 Tara - All Rights Reserved
MikeFessel
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since 2003-04-19
Posts 321
Brooklyn, NYC, USA
1 posted 2003-05-05 08:30 AM


CountryGal,
Oh another sweet poem of the longing of love! This is beautiful as well. Ha, I wonder how many people reading this will be staring up at the stars tonight

    Mike

Zaynab
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since 2003-05-04
Posts 59
Kuwait
2 posted 2003-05-05 10:13 AM


you master words of love, and this poem captured the longing for a love that's oo far away to reach...

Beautiful. Take care

Zaynab
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Kill me tonight and I will love again
Leave me to live and I live in pain
Leave me no love and I live in vain
Kill me tonight and kill the pain

[This message has been edited by Zaynab (05-05-2003 10:14 AM).]

rosepetals25
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3 posted 2003-05-05 12:02 PM


I have to say welcome to passions, since I never told you that

And I am enjoying your writing Romance is always a plus with me hehe.  

Tara

CountryGal
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since 2003-03-09
Posts 24
Missouri, USA
4 posted 2003-05-05 10:49 PM


Thanks for the replies. I kind of like looking at the stars.....lol I think they are very lovely and inspire so many thoughts.

You have my love for a lifetime.

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