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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Cool, crisp blue you Calm me soothe me Grab me and move me Hands of silk and honeydew electrifies me through and through and you. . . Daze me amaze me Take my breath and fly away with me |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sue, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I just love how your poetry "feels", whether it is love, compassion, or the tears one cries, just the thought of honeydew smiles made me smile! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is another gorgeous gem of your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Wow that sounds like the beginning of a great song... You have such a way with words Littlewing... Very nice piece! Richy |
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CountryGal Junior Member
since 2003-03-09
Posts 24Missouri, USA |
Very sweet indeed. I like it.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
littlewing What a way to wake up, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You have amazing talent Sue... So much said here...in so few words. But, not one word wasted...excellent!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Zaynab Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 59Kuwait |
I've always said "less is more" thank you for proving my point wihtin a shadow of a doubt. A beautiful heartfelt moving piece. Well done Zaynab xxxxxxxx Kill me tonight and I will love again |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sue - this is wonderful....and going directly into my library!! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ah this is perfect! The rhytm, the words, simply gorgeous. Love, Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
great rhyming *s M |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I like this Great job.Tara |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Ahh! The one that inspires this must be an exceptional human being. The kind of person that would let you breathe...To take (to) the air, as it were. This is lovely Sue! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - ok, you got me with this one. I'm on the way... BC |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Simply..beautiful |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is so you little birdie~ and how I see you in my minds eye~ Beautifully! Tweet, Tweet~  |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely beautiful, Sue. I hope all is well with you. Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hands of silk and honeydew electrifies me through and through and you... Yep, the people on these pages of blue can surely do that to us. Can't they? It's a very good feeling, too. Hugs, little one  Ethel |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
It may sound sappy but: Daze me amaze me Take my breath and fly away with me those feelings happen every time I read your poetry I couldnt put it in words any better than you already have What a truly beautiful write from such a talented writer |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
smiling here... regards, sudhir |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Noah: always making me smile thank you Richy - a song? wow - thank you CountryGal: how very sweet of you TY Nancy: goodness you are much to swet to me thank you SY: hehehe thank you - hope you enjoyed your morning lol Vandana - thank you so much! Chris - in your libray - oh now I am smiling TY Z - much too much kind to me thank you Margherita - always so good to see you here thank you sweet friend Maureen - from you that means a lot Tara - thank you so much Ed: hmmmm - sometimes I do let the waters wash me clean - thank you Bil - hahahaha - you have been on your way three or four times now lol thank you Raph - thank you - beautiful hmmm - I like that - used to know that I did Sue - yes I am fine thank you and always you make me smile Bluesy - one word for you - no two tweet tweet lol - thank you *wink* Eric - thank you - love to see you reading me Ethel - you got it sister Thank you Dream - oh my - I feel the same for your writng too - am glad I can make you feel - is my goal here - thank you Sudhir - so happy I can make you smile thank you thanks guys xxoo |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
bump - to my favorite writer - lol - How I do love your writing |
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Lost_Soul Junior Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 37California, United States |
very sweet. keep up the good work. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thnaks dream! Hey lost - so very sweet of you - TY Thanks guys xxoo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
its nice to fly again, yes.......... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - a dove I be to fly with you... BC |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahhh Michele - the fresh breeze is amazing -isnt it? Bill - a dove - how very sweet! What a sweetie you are to me . . . Thanks guys xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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