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CD
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since 2001-01-27
Posts 101


0 posted 2003-05-04 06:18 PM


In all that I say
I say just one thing
The voice of my heart
The whisper of my love:

If you were to leave
Go wherever God takes you
I ask you to keep only one thing
Keep only one promise

That you would remember me
In your troubles, in your joy
At dawn and at dusk
That you would keep me in your heart.

© Copyright 2003 CD - All Rights Reserved
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
1 posted 2003-05-05 01:21 PM


This is a dear and sweet request....
Very nice!!!!!
I would like to read more from you!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Zaynab
Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 59
Kuwait
2 posted 2003-05-05 01:24 PM


Lovely, I hope you get what you asked for, a request so sweet would be a sad thing to turn down.

Take care and keep writing

Zaynab
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Kill me tonight and I will love again
Leave me to live and I live in pain
Leave me no love and I live in vain
Kill me tonight and kill the pain

rosepetals25
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PA
3 posted 2003-05-05 06:41 PM


Awwww.. with sweetness like that how could they not?

Tara

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