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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2003-05-04 06:01 PM


In a dream so special,
that it carries the spirit
higher than the highest mountain
the elevation of your mind
reaching the summit
of your universes power .

In a pristine view
of stilled serenity,
the music of your soul
reaches out in the flames,
that warms your smile
in soothing relaxation
of total intoxication.

Stars sparkling on black velvet,
rippling waves of pleasure,
blanketing cradle of love,
upon light beams
dancing within your magic.

Beams crashing together in waves,
exploding rainbow tracers,
the beginning of the spiritual awakening,
a revival of revitalization,
of how unique you are,
in an inner glow blossoming,
from a garden of loving contentment.

Let the winds ride the skies,
as the ocean beats against the sand,
bare footed and carefree,
a mind melt of caressing releases.

Child of my past memories,
it is time to fly free of aged bondage
of confined conservatism,
so release the imprisoned mind
from the chains of others restrictions,
let it create breezes of intellectual images,
so a child can return to find their destiny.

In fantasies of fairy tale reality,
let the doves seeking the internal peace
in a flight so dynamically pure,
the soul rests as the bagpipes wail,
it is your time to sing alone,
in the words that will break someone’s heart,
in tears of infatuated joy,
seeing how special you are,
until the sunsets into the heavens
of angels serenading an old soldier home,
from a battle to open up minds
to the world inside them.

D.Lester Young
Somewhere in America not on company time 05/03/03


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Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
1 posted 2003-05-05 01:23 PM


This is very very good!!!!!
I enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-05-25 04:39 AM


wow, I give this another go round!
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2003-05-26 08:39 PM


In your closing, you said it all~

*applause*

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