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Goodknight
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0 posted 2003-06-02 07:35 PM


I ran so far into the night
Trying to get as far as I could
Away from the light
Light shows the scars and fears
Let that all stay inside
I cried
Let them all live away
Don’t shine a light inside
Run yes run
Into the night
Stay away stay away
Piercing light


[This message has been edited by Goodknight (06-02-2003 07:48 PM).]

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22NICK22
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1 posted 2003-06-02 07:50 PM


We're all strangers in the night...
Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-06-02 07:51 PM


Haunting thoughts here Paul..
It is SO great to read your words once again!!
Good stuff m'friend.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2003-06-02 07:54 PM


Paul...sometimes the scars and fears when seen in the light, don't seem so bad.  Lots of emotional pull in this poem, my friend...I hope all is well with you.  
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4 posted 2003-06-02 09:32 PM




(big hugggssssssss) You know, over the years I have learning something, and that is even if you can't see the scars in the darkness, you can still feel them! (sigh) Sometimes looking at them isn't so bad, but if you don't crawl out of the dark a solution may never be made and the remedy sometimes has to come through understanding! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I offer you angel hope hugs in helping these fears diminish, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have suc a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

whiskey
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5 posted 2003-06-02 09:41 PM


If we dont look at our scars in the light we can never fix them facing fears is the best way to over come them. Great piece, well expressed


Julie

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

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6 posted 2003-06-03 03:06 AM


me too
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