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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-05-04 11:48 AM


“AGAIN NEW”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Something inside is saying for me to write,
perhaps it’s my muse prompting me now,
I want to write of love and tender romance,
my inspiration comes from you somehow…

When dawn breaks with the rising sun,
and your eyes first open in morning’s light,
I can only stare captivated by what I see,
knowing I was with you during the night…

So my fingers type on these many keys,
putting words together dreamy with you,
a sentence, a verse, one after the other,
when it’s done my being is again new…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Startime55
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1 posted 2003-05-04 11:53 AM


Filled with tenderness and beauty....Your inspiration has poured through you filling your heart and mind with beautiful words that capture the heart of love...Stunning work, Bill...it sings softly...

Ivy Rose
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2 posted 2003-05-04 12:29 PM


Bill...Exceptionally sensitive and tender write. Shows you have the soul of a poet. Wonderful writing as always, Bill. ***Ivy Rose
littlewing
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3 posted 2003-05-04 12:43 PM


Bill:

very nice
a release . . . write it and let it go
amazing xxoo

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-05-04 12:47 PM


Bill, this is exactly how I feel about writing about my Gary and me. It renews the joy and happiness that we feel, and pushes away the bad memories of another life.
This one, kind Sir, is another keeper for me.
Hugs,
Ethel
(By the way, thank you very much for your comments on my poem "Tear Drops". Those thoughts make me cry, so I haven't even answered the replies yet. Just know that I really do appreciate you.)  

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-05-04 12:53 PM


ooopppsss!! Forgot to keep it, goofy me...  
Enchantress
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6 posted 2003-05-04 12:58 PM


Very tender...very loving Bill.
Touched me deep, this did...
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Duncan
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7 posted 2003-05-04 01:34 PM


'When dawn breaks with the rising sun,
and your eyes first open in morning’s light,
I can only stare captivated by what I see,
knowing I was with you during the night…'

It's what poetry is all about...
Nicely expressed Bill.

Patricia
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8 posted 2003-05-04 02:19 PM


Oh Bill, you are again new after writing?  This is so cool.  I always feel something is welling up inside of me just before I write...almost like labor pains.  Then after the write is complete, I feel sort of emptied, like I have given birth.  I hope this is not too much information, but that it the process for me.  Sometimes the labor is a long and hard struggle, and other times, it is short-lived and the verse is before me.  

Thanks for sharing your beautiful verse.  

-Patricia

Margherita
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9 posted 2003-05-04 03:10 PM


Your words wrap me in a warm blanket to feel cozy within.
So tender!
Love, Margherita

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10 posted 2003-05-05 02:39 AM




(smiles) Oh Bill, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I want to always try and write something for my dream girl when I find her so she can be convinced I've never stopped loving her too and make her fall in love all over again! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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11 posted 2003-05-05 06:43 PM


Mr. Romance strikes again   You always make me sigh  

Tara

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (05-05-2003 10:26 PM).]

Martie
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12 posted 2003-05-05 06:57 PM


Bill...If a night makes such romance in poetry...it must have been a wonderful night!
nakdthoughts
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13 posted 2003-05-05 07:00 PM


Bill are you sure you don't have a clone somewhere?

Always the romantic

hugs
M

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14 posted 2003-05-05 07:02 PM


Ya done good BC,  yes sirree... Nice one Bill.
NewEnglandlazurlu
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15 posted 2003-05-05 07:30 PM


BC ~~ such a loving write 'on your many keys.'  I always know when I see your name that I'm in for a special treat.

Huggles and Laughter, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

J. K. Mitchell
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16 posted 2003-05-05 08:02 PM


This is so beautiful.  I love your work.

"Cuidado con mi corazon."--R. Martin

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