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Open Poetry #26
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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-05-04 11:06 AM


Captivating Dreamtime

Those special places
Dreams have taken me
Nestled in loving arms
By a shimmering sea

Chancing the times
Where lovers can meet
Tasting forbidden fruit
Whilst being discreet

Tenderly embracing
With fire burning bright
Desires that tantalized
Throughout the night

Pleasuring endlessly
We sensuously entwine
Held in loves afterglow
Captivating dreamtime


    Hope©2003
© Copyright 2003 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Zaynab
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1 posted 2003-05-04 11:19 AM

Beautiful write, very sensual, lovely smooth flow.

Well done

Zaynab

Kill me tonight and I will love again
Leave me to live and I live in pain
Leave me no love and I live in vain
Kill me tonight and kill the pain
Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-05-04 11:19 AM

I'm keeping this beauty. thanks for penning it for my library collection
Startime55
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3 posted 2003-05-04 11:25 AM

This stunning poem is captivatingly sensual...ABSOLUTELY STUNNING HOPE....You have done a magnificent job here....
HopeS
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4 posted 2003-05-04 11:33 AM

Thank you Zaynab for your kind reply , so pleased you enjoyed
Hope
HopeS
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5 posted 2003-05-04 11:34 AM

Thank you Kacy , I feel honoured to be in your library
Hope
HopeS
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6 posted 2003-05-04 11:36 AM

thank you Karen , I appreciate you sweet kind reply
Hugs Hope
Bill Charles
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7 posted 2003-05-04 01:58 PM

HopeS - a most lovely dreamtime indeed...

BC
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