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CountryGal
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since 2003-03-09
Posts 24
Missouri, USA

0 posted 2003-05-04 10:27 AM


Let's Dance

Let us dance under the moon
So we can see each other in a different light
Just beams coming down from the moon
Don't you just love the moon light

The beams seem to toy with your hair
Making shimmering light that catches my eye
It makes me want to just play with your hair
Can't you see the love in my eyes

The song is just perfect for our lovers dance
It is a perfect song just for romance
Slowly dancing with you makes my heart melt
Your heart seems to skip a beat I swear I felt

Let's dance like this until morning light
Then we will see each other in another light
One with the golden rays of the sun
Man won't that just be fun

I love this time when it is just us two
Showing our love for each other
Something before we just couldn't do
For our lives just didn't have us being together

Now that we are here
I never want us to part
My love for you is what I want you to hear
For you're always in my heart



© Copyright 2003 Tara - All Rights Reserved
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
1 posted 2003-05-04 10:52 AM


This is quite a lovely dance....
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!
LIKED THIS!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
2 posted 2003-05-04 11:09 AM


Welcome to Passions in Poetry, CountryGal... This is a wonderful place, and we always welcome another hopelessly romantic poet to find a comfy place among us....

Check your email for a special greeting..

Sunshine
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Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2003-05-04 11:14 AM



Welcome to Passions!  
I'm going to enjoy watching you dance around our halls!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
4 posted 2003-05-04 11:16 AM


Welcome to Passions....I love this kind of dance and you bring the vision to life, underneath the moonlight...Well done...

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2003-05-04 12:04 PM


Aha! Another moonbeam shines!
Welcome to Passions! We have many dancers here

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-05-04 01:06 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Loved dancing to your first post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

CountryGal
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since 2003-03-09
Posts 24
Missouri, USA
7 posted 2003-05-04 01:34 PM


Thank you all for that welcome. I'm sure I'll fit in just fine.
Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2003-05-10 05:27 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is such a beautiful debut, sweet friend, and may you always dance with your love and keep taking once more from the top, this is lovely, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet CountryGal, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your fabulous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet CountryGal, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Magnus
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South Carolina, USA
9 posted 2003-05-10 06:05 PM


Yes, you will find a fair share of romantic
writer..or as Nan said Hopeless Romantics
here at Passions...

Welcome, enjoyed the poem..

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
10 posted 2003-05-10 06:52 PM


Tara:

this is lovely
nice entrance
Welcome to PIP!

Let us dance under the moon
So we can see each other in a different light

amazing visuals here
in a different light . . .
xxoo

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