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MultipliCity
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since 2003-05-04

Posts 7
Portland , OR

0 posted 2003-05-04 07:22 AM

The music in my head defines my place in the universe.
Booming break beats and smooth melodies reverberate between my temples.
Love ballads accompany me in my moments of silent reflection.
A lonesome blues riff boards the train.
And transforms with stunning eloquence as my stop approaches.
When I sink into the sidewalk the pace of the hi-hat quickens.
My heart is the kick my footsteps the snare.
The crash cymbal awakens me from my ever persistent day-mares.
As the Reggae pulse steadies my pace.
When I see her , "her" being my vision of beauty , a symphony erupts and shortens my breath.
The strings represent my stubbornness.
The horns manifest in her magnetism.
The percussion is the glue.
The life force that brings us together.
When these elements collide we will know our calling.
For now our imaginations perform their solos.
And the jukebox of our memories plays on

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-05-04 07:48 AM

Goodness, I heard that beat coming down the block! Welcome to Passions! With writing like this, I can see that we're going to be well entertained by your muse[s]. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Zaynab
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since 2003-05-04

Posts 59
Kuwait

2 posted 2003-05-04 08:24 AM

Hello again!

I loved the links between music and feelings/thoughts/emotions etc. Very clever and well written. The connections didn't seem forced at all and everything correlates (sp?) very well.

Well done, and hope to read more soon.

Zaynab
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Kill me tonight and I will love again
Leave me to live and I will live in pain
Leave me no love and I live in vain
Kill me tonight and kill the pai

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

3 posted 2003-05-04 10:56 AM

Ahhh...music, the universal language. It transcends barriers of race, gender, culture. It appeals to the emotions born of the heart. It is indeed our greatest accompaniest through our journey here. The cliche rings so true...Music is, indeed, the soundtrack of our lives.

From one music lover to another...Welcome to Passions. I hope you find the beauty and inspiration here that I have found.

Looking forward to more,
-Patricia

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-05-04 11:14 AM

love this upbeat love poetry!
Welcome to Passions!

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2003-05-04 11:32 AM

Excellent...you write the music in your head beautifully so that all can hear it...Well done...

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

6 posted 2003-05-04 11:38 AM

Welcome! This is a wonderfully creative poem. I have music in my head, too, and would never have thought to express it so. Thanks!

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

7 posted 2003-05-04 11:40 AM

~Welcome to Passions~

What everyone else said.
Plus, I like the last line.

Look forward to more of your poetry.

Pat

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-05-05 01:30 AM

(smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, this is a beautifully symphonic debut, sweet friend, I only wish I could hear you sing this love song, you must have a wonderful voice as your heart speaks with utmost sincere and lovely poetry here, yay, rock on, I love this! Welcome to Passions, sweet Daniel, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-05-05 02:11 AM

Daniel:

"precious and unforgotten
like a flower in a book
I turned you on
and turned you up
and from me - my heart you took"

Nice entrance - Welcome to PIP!
you will love it here
xxoo

MultipliCity
New Member

since 2003-05-04

Posts 7
Portland , OR

10 posted 2003-05-05 03:37 AM

I have never been to a sight that offers so much encouragment to a newbie...thank you all....more to come...peace

[This message has been edited by MultipliCity (05-05-2003 03:38 AM).]

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