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waldopepper
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since 2003-03-18
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Tennessee, USA

0 posted 2003-05-04 12:25 PM


Kissing the dust from Ten Mile Basin
a taste of the strong-arm summer run,
breakneck paces with familiar faces
under a relentless western sun.

Give to us all of it, for the while
our dire, delirious gamblings go,
drinking cheap whiskey seemed less risky
than what lay ahead in the Basin below.

Blistering metal in the bed of that Ford
we blessed the bumps of a dirt packed road,
taking in air that would rip through our hair
and lighten hesitation from the reckless load.

Reaching the outskirts brought back to mind
memories of countless trips we'd taken before,
but the means had changed, the places arranged
a more terrible outcome in store.

The Basin was quiet like a beckoning tomb
with plenty of room for a half dozen souls,
and in looks forsaken we knew we'd be taken
for granted, for the sins soon taking their toll.

Katie was scared but her tears would deny
her the chance to regain what she had lost,
nevermore would they label her a whore--
in the Basin came today the tempest tossed.

Guilt of our crimes seemed a minimal price
righteous rage always seems that way,
no longer just kids with Wild Turkey and lids
we'd grown down to the evil that would make them pay.

Kissing the dust from Ten Mile Basin
a taste of the strong-arm summer run,
sweet justice thrived to silence the lies
before it was all over, said and done.


© Copyright 2003 Walter Waddle - All Rights Reserved
ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
1 posted 2003-05-04 03:08 AM


not sure what it was that had you go there...
sounds like a wild bird hunt?...or and all in all unexpected adventure, nicely penned


Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2003-05-07 10:44 AM


Intersting write....
Enjoyed!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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