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Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2003-05-03 10:53 PM



Dreams come
Dreams go
dream a little
and you will
never know

Dream to much
and you
could lose
touch of
reality

Which I must
say now a days
that may
be the thing
we all need to do

Dream more and
Buy less put
all the needed
excess to a rest



Rogue

P.S.
Let loose the tiger
grrrooowwwwllll!



© Copyright 2003 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-05-04 01:06 PM


LOL, yes, please keep dreaming!
Justbleu
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2 posted 2003-05-05 01:25 PM


I agree with you.....
Enjoyed!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


j-oh-E
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since 2003-05-01
Posts 59
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3 posted 2003-05-05 01:47 PM


Wow,
short and to the point.  Although, I felt that it needed to be longer so that your message could be transmitted better.  All I have is a "fuzzy picture."  Don't leave me, the reader, hanging on.  Not a bad submission though.  Not by a long shot.

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4 posted 2003-05-05 03:56 PM


LOL Thomas...what Tiger?  HeeHee!!  

I like this poem. Good idea, don't you think?  
Hugs,
Ethel

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
5 posted 2003-05-05 06:30 PM


Great sound and content!
Love, Margherita

Thomas119gold
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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)
6 posted 2003-05-06 11:13 AM


Tony Tiger its
GREATTTTTTT
lol

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