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Final Poems |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
We move to deeper intimacies. Our tongues thirsting for a liquid flow of words in which to speak. We are poets entering new realms - Writing verses in the layers we discard. Until at last we move to a silent understanding. And write the final poem of our souls. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Brilliant! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Awesome write! TD |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
It is no secret to my friends how much I love your writing. I told a male friend of mine about how beautiful your soul must be to be able to write as you do. He wanted me to send him some of your poetry. Well, I sent him one of your lovely romantic writings. He loved it! I believe this one has got to be Act II, going out as soon as I finish here. You are amazing. This one is just so....so you! Who can ask for anything more! -Patricia |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
"Writing verses in the layers we discard." ... This touches me deeply!...as does all of the poem. Thank you, Ericc. When you think you have heard it all, |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
ABSOLUTE PERFECTION...I love it... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Deep write, it moved me in extraordinary ways. I hope this is not the last I read from you though. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You have a light touch and a true eye -- well done. I sometimes wonder how many more I'll write, and if I'll know it when I reach my soul and start to write it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
You have an amazing talent! Gonna have to look for your old stuff to...lol Keep it up! Richy |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sigh! You dive deep into the mystery of the soul ...where words dance in silence and perfect beauty .... final poems, but never-ending, recorded for eternity. You are a wonderful poet. Love, Margherita  |
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Mindfire New Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 6 |
You put into words what im sure we all feel in that place between dusk and dawn where the mind wanders and the soul emerges. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc--A poet's movement toward the most profound, would probably be silent. Just my thought that the final poem of the soul would have no words to explain it. Your poem is thoughtful and thought provoking. |
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