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Tim
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0 posted 2003-05-03 02:27 PM


Last night there came with evening's falling, on fading scape a gentle calling,
A mist, a mist and nothing more, not a rain from heaven's floor,
Pouring forth in gods' implore; t'was but a mist and nothing more.

Not from above, not from below, with source unknown; nor who's bestow,
T'was but a mist and nothing more, that came a calling at earthen door
Upon the calm of eventide, surrounding all yet not beside.

Did you hear the calling, calling of the mist?
Gentle whispers to the soul, in seek of life's exist,
T'was but a mist and nothing more, a' calling out in life's explore.

[This message has been edited by Tim (05-03-2003 02:41 PM).]

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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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1 posted 2003-05-03 03:47 PM


Lyrical and full of beauty...great job!
Eric

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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2 posted 2003-05-03 04:01 PM




Whispering how quietly beautiful this is...
Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2003-05-03 04:14 PM


Nice scheme of thoughts here...enjoyed very much. TD
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