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Months Become Years...Yet, He Waits
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Months Become Years...Yet, He Waits |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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 Webshots Photos ~~~~~~ Days become weeks Weeks turn into months Then months become years And still.... here they are With him waiting patiently without reservations Always believing that she will eventually come around that she will trust him totally and completely She has given her all to him except for that one part She has tried with everything that she has to give him all of herself But she is so afraid because of the broken trust of yesteryear But still.... he waits patiently without reservations With his unconditional love for her And she thanks him with all of her heart ~~~~~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-03-2003 11:52 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It comes, it comes.... soft in the hum, soft, in his hum.... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ethel: Oh MY! this is breathtaking . . . so beautiful goodness - you always surprise me and the picture? I love horses too amazing . . . you are xxoo And she thanks him with all of her heart very nice |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Sometimes it is that close... You've captured a heart well here Ethel. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"And she thanks him with all of her heart." Touching...very touching...James |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Oh my....this poem touches the heart and soul...MAGNIFICENT....One day she will give her all and it will be worth his wait....I love the message of this poem... |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Patience as a virture is hard to come by these days so when it is found it must be cherished. Ethel, this is absolutely lovely! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
beautiful Ethel thanks for sharing |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey Ethel!  This is about as pretty as it gets lady... and? it truly touched my heart because I know... Hugs you.  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
What a great poem and graphic too! This one I'll keep... Richy |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Ethel, so much of your poetry always makes me cry because it so well relates to how I feel and how I wait to make a girl feel special and wanting for the first time to hold a girls hand and how I long for my first kiss to share with her! (wipes tears) I want to love my dream girl so much and I always imagine how she feels away from me and not knowing what I look like but how she loves me already and all I can envision is her beautiful silhouette and her beautful long hair waving like an angel! (big hugggsssssss) This is beautiful and I know Gary will find a way very soon to be with you forever, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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