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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-05-03 08:08 AM


Can You

If I fantasies my write
Paint the snow a pinker white
Turn a breeze to angry rage
Make lightening fill the page

Will it flush your waiting mind?
Clear the mist of nonaligned
Let you see the sky of hew
Magnify the crystal dew.

Charge you like electric shock
Make real the mocking birds mock
Bring you to an instance pause
Perhaps to see a Santa clause

Would it really help the fare?
Lift you to a moments dare
Grab the seconds of your will
Ride it in a reckless thrill

If you say it can be done
Then I have lost and you have won

© Copyright 2003 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-05-03 08:12 AM


hey...I win every time I click on your poetry. There's no gamble there, sy!

Hugs, to you--now that I've had my morning seymour, maybe I can sleep...

(oh..uh..don't go readin' anything into that folks! )

's to sy!

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-05-03 08:15 AM


serenity,
Gee Randy picked it up right away, LOL

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2003-05-03 08:19 AM


We always win when we read your poetry...
its a win win rhyme time
missed ya Stinkylove

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-05-03 08:24 AM


Goodmorning Seymour  
I'm here early today, and I'm glad. I sure do wish that I coyuld rhyme poetry the way you do. When I read it, it seems as though I'm just skipping along.  
Have a good day.
Heart Hugs,
Ethel

       

Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-05-03 08:37 AM



What was that whooshing sound?
Ah yes, the flushing of one's mind...
fill it up with more, Sy...
I'm ready now!


Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2003-05-03 08:48 AM


Ahhhh ... now it's been far too long since I've had a chance to catch up on some reading. Boy, I've missed you and your wonderful writing Sy.  Much enjoyed!

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

ethome
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7 posted 2003-05-03 09:04 AM


You're a clever guy Sy
This is refreshing to say the least....I liked it much!!

Tim
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8 posted 2003-05-03 09:06 AM


Every morn he pens a rhyme,
That's darn near perfect every time,
It almost makes one want to yell,
How can this Sy guy write so well?
But I don't and in silence sit,
As I marvel at Sy's great wit,
His pearls of wisdom I prefer,
To read each day; good day, fine sir.



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9 posted 2003-05-03 09:09 AM


Loved this Sy..
I know some people who would say I need my mind flushed..
maybe because I just know there is a Santa Claus!!
Chai tea this beautiful spring morn?
Good...I'll pour.
~Morning hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2003-05-03 09:52 AM


JM,
Just whipped out all my answers to the lovely people below, just shows you what geting old can do. I recieved you pictures and mail, glad you all had a good time. Missed you but then I always do. Randy sends his love as do I.
WWRS

Ethel
You rhyme very well.

Sunshine
That whoosh was a

Kit,
Yes it has but I'm keeping tabs on you. Hugs and stuff.

ethome,
And you are a good friend.

Tim,
Hay Tim your right on my heels, LOL.

Nancy,
Randy will fly me right over, hugs.

Duncan
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11 posted 2003-05-03 06:29 PM


I slept in...Morning Sy.  
Startime55
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12 posted 2003-05-03 06:32 PM


BRAVO!!!No contest...you will always win with words like this flowing through your pen....Wonderful...

Chanson
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13 posted 2003-05-03 06:44 PM


There are many winners here because we
read your poetry. *s

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2003-05-03 09:51 PM


Good morning Duncan

Startime55
Thank you for the bravo.

Chanson
Clever reply, thank you.

Mistletoe Angel
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15 posted 2003-05-10 04:14 PM




(sigh) It can be done and I think too often we mislead our integrities in believing the spells and differences single words can cause! (big hugggsssssss) So now you tell me...do YOU think you can...we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2003-05-10 05:54 PM


Noah,
Then I have lost and you have won.

Bill Charles
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17 posted 2003-05-10 09:07 PM


Seymour - I know that every time I open one of your poems to read I won't be disappointed, like this one...

BC

Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2003-05-10 10:32 PM


Bill,
Thank you so much.

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