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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-05-03 07:34 AM


Sunday Girl

My Sunday girl called me up
all worried today.
Seems I forgot to call her
about this coming Sunday
so she called me to
confirm our special day.
Honey, of course I want
to spend Sunday with you.
Sorry I forgot to call.
But Sunday wouldn't be
as fun without you
so on Sunday
here's what we'll do.
First we'll go for a swim.
I know that's your favorite pastime.
Then we'll have have some of
that delicious Sushi again.
Wasn't it good last time?
Later we'll fit a
romantic movie in.
During which we'll share as  
many hugs and kisses we can.
Continue to have no fear.
For I am yours my dear.
I'm your Sunday man.

JamesLee
May02
2003



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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-05-03 07:55 AM


For some reason this reminded me of those days of the week panties--and how Sunday's were always white. (Has nothing to do with your poem, I'm just weird like that.)

Sweet poetry, James.

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2 posted 2003-05-03 08:09 AM




"I'm your Sunday man"  Reliable and consistant....now that is the way to building a relationship...sounds like from a different era.

Enjoyed the easy flow of this, James,

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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3 posted 2003-05-03 08:21 AM


A fabulous reminder that a girl wants to be "asked" rather than have the date assumed, no matter the "Sunday Girl/Sunday Man" titles.

Enjoyed!

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2003-05-03 08:54 AM


Well, what a wonderful way to spend a Sunday James ... very much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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5 posted 2003-05-03 10:28 AM


This is excellent -- a screensave of what it's like to be a man...the real kind.

....but you gotta' start workin' on those other days, mon! Sounds like there's someone who'd be happy to help you with that........

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6 posted 2003-05-03 11:39 AM


I liked

Tara

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7 posted 2003-05-03 12:49 PM


What a lovely day you will have indeed
liked this one alot James
xxoo

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