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Paradise - duet by dreambuilder & littlewing
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Paradise - duet by dreambuilder & littlewing |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Sweet breeze upon my face caress this beauty Unsurpassed Pacific plumeria melded perfection intoxicated by you Take hold of my hand lead me to Paradise My breath taken gasping for air . . . I tread within your eyes I lie heart stolen freely |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
 plumeria ... and I tread on the path of paradise ... upon the effect of your beautiful words ... holding my breath. Sooooo lovely! Love to both. Margherita  [This message has been edited by Margherita (05-03-2003 04:28 AM).] |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Nice to meet you Littlewing, I'm new here (first reply!) I enjoyed your poem... I live on the west coast and love the beach... I only wish I got out there more often... I'll see you on the boards... Take Care, Richy |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To see a duet by dreambuilder with littlewing... those two names alone being a poem in their own right... now, how special can this be... very...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I agree with Karilea.. The names alone...make me hold my breath... in anticipation...and, I was not disappointed. Beautifully blended...wonderfully written. ~Smiles & Hugs to you both, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Absolutely beautiful work from two of my favourites. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Exhilarating!!! You two, exhilarating!!! -Bob |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Wonderful poetic duet from you both. Your words echoing the thoughts of each other. ***Ivy Rose |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Simply beautiful. Eric |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - hey you two, this is really great, nice writing... BC |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
The "little one" with the "dream"..... How could it not be beautiful?? And it certainly is, too!! Hugs to you both  Ethel |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
especially sweet |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky and silky...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Margherita: so very sweet you are thank you - *smiling* Richy: thank you and welcome! Ohh yes - this write is about the islands of Hawaii - miss the place so much - we both do - yep will see you on the pages too Karilea: always such sweet words thank you so much - *humbled* Nancy: goodness - thank you I am amazed at your reply - really made me smile today! Raph: aww sweety - you know you are my favorite too - thank you xxoo Bob: exhilirating from you is a blessing in itself - thank you Rose: thank you so much! What a nice compliment! Ericc - now beautiful from you means a whole lot - thank you Bill: thank you - as are your writings - simply lovely Awww Ethel: that was so sweet - the little one with the dream hehehe - thank you ecrivan: where have you been? Thank you so very much James! You have spoken to me! To us - very cool lol - silky - I like that Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (05-04-2003 12:34 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Yay! Oh Sue and Dreambuilder, this is gorgeous, sweet friends, you make such a wonderful poetic team showing the true colors of paradise in poetic rainbows, yay! (smiles) Another wonderful spectrum of poetic talent, sweet friends, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Sue and Dreambuilder, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you both! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
....speechless.... |
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Zaynab Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 59Kuwait |
Breathtakingly beautiful Well done Zaynab xxxxxxxx Kill me tonight and I will love again |
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morefiah Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 150Spanish Town, Jamaica |
What do you say when it has all been said before? Thank you both. Garfield |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Noah - always so sweet Dixie - open your mouth . . . hehe more - too sweet you are thank you Z - thank you so much thanks guys xxoo |
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