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Open Poetry #26

The me that died

MattGarcia
Junior Member

since 2003-01-04

Posts 19
Texas, USA

0 posted 2003-05-03 12:33 PM

The me that died

There once was a feeling
I could feel inside
It was a wonderful feeling
That has now died

I felt complete
So perfectly whole
Now inside
I feel a big hole

Nothing could touch us
Or so I thought
It was too perfect
We hardly ever fought

And when we did
I always just knew
That the next day
It would all be through

The new me was great
Such a happy young guy
It was such a tragedy
The way he had to die

[This message has been edited by MattGarcia (05-03-2003 12:36 AM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-05-03 01:40 AM

nice thoughts remembered

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

2 posted 2003-05-03 04:32 PM

Yep, life is hard sometimes, but that's how we learn and grow.

Enjoyed the read.

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