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Fate?
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Fate? |
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Danielle Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 80Providence, RI, USA |
Is all of what's been happening just Fate? Is my life planned out to the tee? I feel like I've lost control Sholdn't life be what you make it? If so, then why is mine so hard? Has Fate palyed an ugly trick on me? Does seeing me in pain make it feel happy inside some how? Why would Fate, such an understanding thing, force me to love what I could not keep? To love and not be able to show that love is worse then to ot love at all Fate gave me a gift The crully ripped it away Just when I had trusted Fate to give me a love I thought I could keep That's when Fate ripped them away Seems Fate always likes to hear my cries of pain See me huddled in a ball and crying... Blessed Be Those Who |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
yes fate has it's ways of entering our lives, nice expresions It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
we live life through fates wanderings, fate is what draws us nearer. Great poem!  Love, |
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