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inspiredpoetwriter
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0 posted 2003-05-02 09:47 PM


5-1-03
As I look in to the sky
Your the star I was to see
When I look in to the sun
Your the sunshine who lives in me
As I dream at night
I dream your holding me
As I listen to the wind blowing
I hope it blows my dull pain away
Your the hand that links with mine
Keeping me sane.

© Ang "03"

© Copyright 2003 Care - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2003-05-02 11:44 PM


the title drew me in, the poem was touching....I found a peace in this....
Lauren~

Through the darkness
I can see your light
And you will always shine
And I can feel your heart in mine

I will remember you

Justbleu
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2 posted 2003-05-05 09:24 PM


I think I know a similar feeling....
Very nice!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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3 posted 2003-05-06 08:40 PM




(smiles) Yay! I'm so happy I found this, sweet friend, I'm glad once again I could help you out, may you find the starlight always shining in you with comfort, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
4 posted 2003-05-08 12:00 PM


Beautiful.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-05-08 03:51 AM


nice!
icebox
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in the shadows
6 posted 2003-05-08 05:38 PM


I sleep every night holding a memory in my arms.  Thank you for sharing this.  I wish you well.
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