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Connel
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0 posted 2003-05-02 06:04 PM


Well, The first thing I want to say that is this has nothing to do with me.. Its just something I wrote, and I hope some of you enjoy it.




Things are not the same.
Time fires at you with perfect aim,
And then time came.
Taking you away.

You had no idea that you passed the past,
As you think that it came to fast,
But the speed of time has been cast,
And then you know, you can’t stay.

Time leads you to old age,
Taking you through the second stage,
You begin to shiver as you turn the page.
You become more scared everyday.

You feel this is your last day,
But somehow you know that you’re okay,
And you have realized this is the only way.
Its time for you to go away.

You’re free from your pain.
Away from the strain,
Its just something no one can explain.
It’s life after death, its paradise.

© Copyright 2003 Chris DeVore - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-05-02 06:06 PM


Chris:

me too . . . nice thoughts
and the line:

you had no idea that you passed the past

truly insightful
xxoo

Connel
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2 posted 2003-05-02 08:46 PM


Thanks. I was thinking some people would have that problem with that line. But, Im glad ya understand it.. lol

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-05-03 07:02 AM


"It's life after death, it's paradise."
Very nice...some refer to this as eternal life...James

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