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Unfinished Thoughts |
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edh Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 111 |
Unfinished thoughts were about in the air. It was out there in the desert that I saw the clouds hanging low... Darkness congregating. Then vanishing. Gray, gray landscape - Dry as the tongue which would speak to the sun and cold as the corridors of the mind. This place was certainly born here tonight. The moon says so and the stars refrain. But it is the ground which listens and waits for the coming footsteps. And it is yet the ground which will move here tonight. Oh stars - If I would have known on the day I was born I would have died that day. Oh moon - It would be fine to be as realistic as something very old to shine as one so young. Oh ground - I will lie here and wait with you. Perhaps sleep. Perhaps dream. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
written well It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Very descriptive poetry that makes me think a bit deeper than usual and also to consider what lies beyond. Good job. -Bob |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I certainly enjoyed this and saved it to read again as there are layers I have yet to go beyond I am sure. |
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