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Janette
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0 posted 2003-05-02 12:50 PM


Soon

Soon ... the very next millisecond
Time difficult to reckon

Soon ... never soon enough
Waiting extremely tough

Soon ... before long
Takes patience to hang on

Soon ... without delay
Please soon come today!

Janette


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1 posted 2003-05-02 07:11 PM


And disappear yesterday and please delay tomorrow.
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2 posted 2003-05-03 07:00 AM


Enjoyed...James
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3 posted 2003-05-03 11:17 AM


Gee..this could be my anthem! Sometimes when we want something badly, soon is so slow!! Nice to read you again.
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4 posted 2003-05-05 09:27 PM


soon and very soon. . . perhaps, even sooner than that. . .

wonderful my friend. . . good to see you again. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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5 posted 2003-05-06 03:59 AM


yes...good expression
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6 posted 2003-05-13 08:26 AM


a wonderful way to put it!
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7 posted 2003-05-13 08:31 AM


Janette
Well done, enjoyed.

Janette
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8 posted 2003-05-13 08:57 AM


Thank you all for not only reading me but leaving me your comments, you have made me smile this morning.

I seem to be saying or wishing for "soon" often and as I mentioned to maverick55 in a reply from another poem ... patience is a virtue ... which is a high standard that I always seem to be reaching for ... maybe I should try a foot stool?  *wink*


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9 posted 2003-05-15 11:50 PM




(sigh) I know yearning ever too well, dearest friend, feels like the sun is rising and setting in the blink of an eye and wondering when the light can blind me more than ever! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, thank you so much for your E-mail and I'm happy to get to know much more about you, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Janette, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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10 posted 2003-05-29 01:12 AM


Yup...This could be my song these, days you know.

I love this. Keep coming back here please? I need some company in here some days, my friend.



You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

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