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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-05-02 09:35 AM



Rendezvous


The tiredness rests in these eyes
joining this morning's light,
as the drizzle mists the new to rise.
I lay prone, the curve of my back pressing,
my life horizontal, a time line running through
my mind, always reminding me
of wastefulness.

Not wanting to be the gossip
or the pain in someone's neck,
I wish to remove the sweat of thoughts,
longing for relaxation, the water's kiss
that harbors me in hold,
rescuing me from the old,
leaving me in warmth of faith
in the new:

A rendezvous with touch,
inner feelings to release where
only shadows watch as steam
fades into me, leaving sensations
of you to coat me in another day's keep.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2003-05-02 09:39 AM


Excellent....took me right along with you on this one, your gift for physical imagery really comes through, and the sentiment so right and real.

More of this...want more of this kind!

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Mon Cherie
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2 posted 2003-05-02 09:43 AM


This is such a sensual piece.... I really love it, esp this part

"A rendezvous with touch,
inner feelings to release where
only shadows watch as steam
fades into me, leaving sensations
of you to coat me in another day's keep"

A rendezvous with touch... If only we can take time off and enjoy stuff that makes your sensory nerves go all tingling...

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Florence

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-05-02 09:48 AM


Ratleader
I have a rendezvous with a bubblebath in about ten minutes...

Thank you Mon Cherie,
M

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