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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2003-05-01 11:10 PM



shut inside
windows open wide
i age 1000 years to your one

these collagen-endowed furrows
are guideposts
to the one who lives inside,
a wizened being
sage of love and youth
seeking more
and more of you

it may take
another 1000 years or so
to close the windows,
and lock you inside my soul:
a willing captive
to our ageless love

© Copyright 2003 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
Jenn Cirrincione
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1 posted 2003-05-02 07:45 AM


very interestingly written
pretty

"Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me."

Nan
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2 posted 2003-05-02 07:52 AM


Very nice.. I like love that's ageless - This is a lovely verse indeed...
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3 posted 2003-05-02 08:38 AM


Veeeery inteeeeresting!---in a good way!

Morning hugs,
EA

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4 posted 2003-05-02 08:51 AM


Oooh lovely....ageless love..I like this...very much.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2003-05-03 04:57 PM


sage of love and youth, and you!
How nice your words are to read~

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2003-05-04 02:02 PM


Ivy Rose - I like the way you have sent this message. Takes some depth in reading, but it's there for sure...

BC

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7 posted 2003-05-04 02:21 PM


You weave a tapestry with your words that make the soul reach out and feel it...I LOVE IT!!!

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8 posted 2003-05-04 04:32 PM


interesting write
enjoyed the collagen line

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9 posted 2003-05-05 08:17 AM


IvyRose~

This sounds like foreverly to me~

Beautiful, just beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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