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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
So many beautiful flowers in a row waiting to be picked, admired, & ultimately whither in your hands To die for, you are in your mouth are sayings hypnotic, quixotic lessons in love longing to be taught & so many willing students attuned to your senses I am no different, so where do I stand? At a distance, lost... Sunkissed. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sunkissed, I like this and have many thoughts regarding it. Perhaps most wrong in comparison to your intent. Please don't be concerned if so, we are all at different levels of understanding and 'getting' the first layer of some poems, not even possible for me, sometimes. Some may be at a distance, lost...I think they are wildflowers..pure-breds, ala, of natural...funny how we get confused between the value of genuine vs. hybreds those as wildflowers, can still breath the fresh air and sway in their own beauty...wildflowers don't die, they disperse their fruit and creation once more produces meadows of peace... Anyway, my take on this. Ever looking for a positive. You made you think, for sure. Hugs you, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Wow! I'm happy to have gotten this one reply. Last I'd check there were none. Thank you, thank you, thank you! Trust me, I love your take on my poem. I admit that the poem wasn't very coherent, nor did it have any real direction- probably the reason why it didn't get replies. However, I'm not complaining. I'm always happy to receive at least one! It's good to be around those who are positive. Especially when one tends to tilt at the other angle. Having a variety of friends helps keep one "centered". *hugs to you* Sunkissed. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'To die for, you are in your mouth are sayings hypnotic, quixotic lessons in love longing to be taught & so many willing students attuned to your senses I am no different, so where do I stand?' Perhaps time to move closer... An excellent write!  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
WOW!!!!Very close to home you hit...these words are reflected in many of us....My gosh...you put it perfectly... |
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