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Open Poetry #26

Shadow Plays

MysticDreamer
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since 2003-04-21

Posts 131

0 posted 2003-05-01 07:00 PM

Shadow Plays

Lost inside the longings of nightfall
Thinking about natures mysteries
When moonlight shown through the windows

Creating shadow plays on the wall
A dance between the wind and trees
Their whispered secrets that no one knows

A sudden gust conspired new shapes
In complete accord with the moon
To form the artist and instument
As wind chimes rang out their tune

davidmerriman
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since 2003-04-30

Posts 123
Dallas, TX

1 posted 2003-05-01 08:01 PM

pretty good. i often find myself writing poems like this, and i enjoy them, but my oppinion wavers because i think there should be more description or more meaning to it, one way or the other.

tis all good. keep writing!

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