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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2003-05-01 10:37 AM

Hey little one
the clouds are playing grey today
and I
in sit alone
am hearing strains of blue

Can you not find a note
or two
that might fall from your lips
and dance finger tips
on keys
soft stroked
to soothe
the lowered ceiling
in chase of
ease?

There are distant rumbles
Somewhere,
beyond my sight
the lightning strikes,
and I
hear the hum...
slow tempoed drums

Hold me in lyrics
honey smooth
that I might taste the sweet
of such this day

this day
is blue...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-05-01 10:43 AM

then sing the soothing song of light
and let it waft into the night,
bring the day onto a close,
and tender petal it with a rose,

sing the song of blues gone gray
and wish it to a holiday,
where all we might do is come, and play,
perhaps read poetry by the bay...

and toward the end as sun comes low,
perhaps we'll chance a golden glow,
where sun and water merge as one,
where blue's gray holiday comes undone...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-05-01 10:47 AM

"Hold me in lyrics
honey smooth
that I might taste the sweet
of such this day

this day
is blue..."

Fits my blue day perfectly Captain...
Much enjoyed the tune...
~Smiles & Hugs Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-05-01 10:58 AM

Hold me in lyrics
honey smooth  Well dang!!

  I'm no stranger to the blue, but I gotta tell you, it never read quite this well!!

Smile Mr. Ron~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (05-01-2003 11:37 AM).]

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

4 posted 2003-05-01 11:12 AM

Great title to go with perfect poem.

"hear the hum, slow tempoed drums"

Honestly should quote the entire poem for each word/line is rich and special to the 'whole' of it.

Your talent never ceases to amaze me.

Enjoyed this greatly,

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

5 posted 2003-05-01 11:26 AM

This is a very very nice write of your day of blue.....
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

6 posted 2003-05-01 11:31 AM

Little boy blue,
come,
blow your horn...

Nice one, Captain.

Sunkissed.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2003-05-01 11:48 AM

Cpat,
Good write, enjoyed the read

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-05-01 11:54 AM

Cpat my friend sometimes we think too much alike..loved this

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

9 posted 2003-05-01 12:07 PM

Stretch out with me in
shade of tree
hot rays of sun
embrace us

Sip sweet lemonade
until we drift
on wings of
warming sleep

Awake we find
the day is gone
night beckons
sweet repose

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

10 posted 2003-05-01 12:18 PM

and I am not adept enough
to turn the clouds around...

I should have tried the watermelon, dammit?

at least I could I have said, today I tried something different...

(how do you always know?)

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2003-05-01 01:01 PM

Mellow jello...Soothing, cooling...

Loved this one, Dear Captain!

Warm hugs,
EA

jennirey
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 198
North Richland HillsTx

12 posted 2003-05-01 01:36 PM

You must wake with a Smile in your eyes and wistle on your leps each day, What a lovely little getaway you created for us to read.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

13 posted 2003-05-01 03:46 PM

Oh, how I wish I could write like this. This is simply beautiful! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2003-05-01 06:54 PM

nice

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

15 posted 2003-05-01 09:42 PM

You really write the blues!
(Pulling out electric fan...sending sunshine)
TD

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

16 posted 2003-05-01 10:27 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ron, I know days like these and I believe rainy days have beauty all to themselves that is inconceivably intangible! (smiles) This is escellent, sweet friend, love the tranquil feel of this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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