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MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16
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0 posted 2003-05-01 09:13 AM



The pressure forced my bones to crack,

Feeling awkward,

As if I was wearing a dirty Mack.

Crouching in a depressed side street,

I was more than a little downbeat.

Hiding from weeping souls` tears,

When I use to confront all those wild frontiers.

Surge of Flashbacks dripped in red,

My pulse reading says I’m dead.

Am I?


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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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1 posted 2003-05-02 11:56 PM


*Hiding from weeping souls` tears,

interesting write has some thoughts to ponder

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

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