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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-05-01 09:56 AM



~*~

When you press your lips to mine
Winter tastes like summer wine
Soft breezes blow cold winds away
As bodies mold like potter's clay

Touches tender, stirring deep
Together making lover's leap
In to the surge of river flow
As passion melts the winter snow

~*~

© Copyright 2003 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-05-01 09:59 AM


Earth Angel
This is a gem, tell me did you find it in heaven? LOL

whiskey
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2 posted 2003-05-01 09:59 AM


Lovely piece so very romantic and soft I like this alot, Made me feel all warm inside

Sorry my man doesnt have a brother RE: to your reply

Of course with a heart and soul like yours any man would be lucky to have you in their lives.

Julie

Margherita
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3 posted 2003-05-01 10:01 AM


Powerfully stirring! I love your passionate creations very much... "into the surge of river flow" Wow!
Love, Margherita

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4 posted 2003-05-01 10:06 AM


Linda, I think this is such a nice piece! It portrays such a vivid picture of being in love... Much enjoyed.

When you press your lips to mine
Winter tastes like summer wine
Soft breezes blow cold winds away
As bodies mold like potter's clay

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-05-01 10:08 AM


Mr. T. ~

Oh, yes! Most definitely, a river such as this flows in heaven!  

~ May your flame burn forever brightly,
EA


Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-05-01 10:41 AM


Julie ~

What a kind and generous reply!!! Thank you very, very much!

Luvin' hugs,
Linda

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-05-01 10:42 AM


Margherita ~

I appreciate your enthusiastic response!   Thank you!

Warm hugs and a big smile,
Linda

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2003-05-01 10:46 AM


Mon Cherie ~

I always get a little thrill when a reader takes the time to write a favourite line or passage from a poem of mine! Thank you!

Warm hugs,
EA

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9 posted 2003-05-01 10:48 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully passionate, sweet friend, I dream ever so much of loving my dream girl and bringing a smile to her heart as warm as the sun and melting all the ice from her heart and making flowers bloom and bumblebees sing! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous and sensual, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

BluesSerenade
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10 posted 2003-05-01 11:02 AM


Nice surge Linda~  
Sometimes you just have to go with the flow,
and believe in where you're going.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this~

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2003-05-01 11:05 AM


Noah ~

There is no doubt at all in my mind that when your love finds you, flowers will bloom and bumblebees sing!

~ Your love match will be divine in all manners...

Huggums,
Linda

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12 posted 2003-05-01 11:05 AM


a very fabulous expression!!!

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2003-05-01 11:09 AM


BluesSerenade ~

Life flows more smoothly when you have faith that all goes as it is meant to be.
Thank you for your thoughtful reply.

Happy Spring!
Linda

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-05-01 11:10 AM


QjQ ~

WOW! Thanx!

Springtime showers & lots of flowers!
EA

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15 posted 2003-05-01 12:42 PM


EarthAngel~
This is just lovely~
Softly sensual ... *sighsssssss*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Earth Angel
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16 posted 2003-05-01 12:46 PM


Marge ~

Thank you for that lovely response!

~ May love fill your days--and your nights!

Warm hugs,
Linda

KoKo
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17 posted 2003-05-01 12:47 PM


This is soooooo beautiful!!!!!! ~hugs~ I really love this!!!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2003-05-01 12:51 PM


KoKo

By gosh, I believe you do! Thank you ever so much for your enthusiastic reply!

Happy Spring!
EA

littlewing
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19 posted 2003-05-02 06:18 PM


Linda:

this is amazingly passionate
beautiful . . .

*smiling*
xxoo

FlyingCloud
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20 posted 2003-05-02 06:25 PM


I couldn't pass this one up. The emotion I felt radiating from this poem was too powerful for me to ignore it. And now I see why.
This poem is very sweet, and makes me long to have someone special again...

^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^
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Earth Angel
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21 posted 2003-05-02 09:17 PM


littlewing ~

I believe you to be as passionate a person and you are writer!

Luvs & hugs,
EA

Earth Angel
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22 posted 2003-05-02 09:19 PM


Hi, FlyingCloud!

That was a wonderful reply! Thank you very much!

P.S. Love your name! I suppose that would be a given!     

Love, Light & High Flying!

Earth Angel

icebox
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23 posted 2003-05-03 02:39 PM


The river and love share the paradox of always being the same while always being different.

A skillfully balanced piece.  Thank you for sharing it.

Honeybee
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24 posted 2003-05-03 03:31 PM


B-I-G sighs here!   Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!

Take care,
Melissa~

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Earth Angel
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25 posted 2003-05-04 10:04 AM


icebox ~

I cannot help but wonder how you came up with this user name!---It's real cooool!

Thank you for such a thoughtful response.

Love & Light,
Earth Angel

Earth Angel
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26 posted 2003-05-04 10:06 AM


Melissa ~

Oooo! That was really nice of you! Thankya kindly!

Love & Blessings,
Linda

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