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Rick
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0 posted 2003-05-01 08:15 AM



Hi, I haven’t written to you before, but live with you each moment of each day. Thank you for being there for me always, as my strength, my support and presence. You have had to endure much, when tired I would not let you sleep, when there was joy I would not let you dance, when there was choice I would not let you walk, you have been attached and held back, for that I apologies. When you ached I would push you on, when angered I would hold you back, when humbled I did not let you pray, again I am sorry. Thank you for staying healthy, not letting me down too often, being there to carry the burden of life, for showing the pleasures of love and the tears of sadness, you have been there for it all.

"Letter to my body"

© Copyright 2003 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2003-05-01 08:39 AM


This is impressive .... I love this awareness of the body's part in our lives.
Well done!
Love, Margherita

Rick
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2 posted 2003-05-01 08:48 AM


Margherita, thank you for this reply and wonderful comment, it was heart felt and greatly appreciated.

Sincerely
Rick

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-05-25 03:38 AM


whoohoo!
Richy
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4 posted 2003-05-25 03:42 AM




Hey Rick, that was really cool! I might have to give it a go myself?

Nice to get a chance to read you again...


Take care pal,

Richy


Rick
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5 posted 2003-05-25 08:40 AM


Hi Dixie, thanks for your reply as always, appreciated.

Richy, how are you my friend, give it a go, something to play with, thanks for the reply and take care my friend.

Sincerely
Rick

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