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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-05-01 08:07 AM


Candid

Candid is my broad of sward
My valley green and my sword
My media my rapier swing
The sharp of it and the sting

It is the music of my dance
And the trusty of my lance
The armor that I wear each day
Amour that lets me clear the way

It’s the flipping of the sleeve
The lunge in pas-s-ado naive
The clatters of the chatters word
The lifting of the shroud absurd

A charge upon the giant lie
A cut across the pliant sigh
A leap upon the back of lack
The beanstalk that was grown by Jack

It’s candid that can slope much wrath
It is the soap within your bath.



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Margherita
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1 posted 2003-05-01 08:19 AM


Candid shines in your eyes ... and your words confirm.
"it can slope much wrath ..." yes, but also "Amour that lets me clear the way .."
Your poems are often a challenge for me .... must check some words, but in the end I grasp what I have to grasp and think "Seymour is DEEP".
Love, Margherita

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2 posted 2003-05-01 08:24 AM



Thank you Sy - I'll be remembering
that you're a'peeking!

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-05-01 08:46 AM


Margherita
A peep in the deep is like a clean sweep.
LOL thank you for the read and reply.

Sunshine,
I don't peep at my loves I stare, LOL

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2003-05-01 08:53 AM


Seymour~

'The lunge in pas-s-ado naive'

Now just how ORIGINAL is that ?
VERY !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2003-05-01 09:05 AM


Well now Seymour...
are you peeking or is that a stare?
Excellent write this morn love.
Tea's on..I'll pour.
Have a wonder-filled day!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-05-01 09:15 AM


Marge,
What a beautiful comment, almost as beautiful as you.

Nancy,
Thank you sweet, I'll have Randy fly me over. LOL

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7 posted 2003-05-01 09:33 AM


My goodness Seymour, I will certainly be keeping an eye on the soap in my shower to-day!!    Enjoyed your words as always. Gave me a grin they did!! Strawberry tarts to-day! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2003-05-01 09:37 AM


Chris,
Strawberry tarts, wonderful, I'll be right there.

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2003-05-01 09:39 AM


Oh, my!  I envisioned you, a gallant knight suited in armor, swinging your sword to clear the way to my bath chamber where I am soaking in a lilac-scented bubble bath! What a great way to start my day!  

May you have a glorious day, sir knight!
Angel hugs & kisses,
EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (05-01-2003 10:58 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2003-05-01 09:56 AM


Earth Angel
Just hold that thought, I'll saddle my Randy and pass your way. LOL

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11 posted 2003-05-01 11:01 AM


I await randy you! I mean, I await Randy and you!

Huggums,
EA

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12 posted 2003-05-01 11:06 AM


Wonderful, wonderful, YOU!

It’s candid that can slope much wrath
It is the soap within your bath.

That's a nice way to slide~
left me smiling this morning!  


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13 posted 2003-05-01 11:15 AM


LOL Seymour, you really are a rascal.....
Randy and all...LOL  
Have a good day, friend.  

Hugs,  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-01-2003 11:16 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2003-05-01 11:44 AM


Earth Angel
Never fear we'll both be there. LOL

BluesSerenade
A smile is a smile, is a smile.

Ethel
Ain't I the one, LOL

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15 posted 2003-05-01 10:59 PM




(sigh) And how we should all climb that beanstalk and go beyond that castle and take ourselves back to the stars! (big hugggsssssss) You can be candid without the camera certainly, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2003-05-02 07:51 AM


Noah,
Thank you for the read and bump.

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