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Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
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0 posted 2003-04-30 11:53 PM


Can't I love you and still be free?
If I melt into a tidepool for you
I might as well be an urchin
Then would you love me
Or set yourself free?


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KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
1 posted 2003-05-01 12:01 PM


Hmm...Thought provoking! I liked this muchly

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

carol
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since 2003-01-25
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2 posted 2003-05-01 12:04 PM


Very nice thoughts

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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Gaia
3 posted 2003-05-01 12:06 PM


Smiling at this one.
I remember the sea urchins from along the California coast. Thanks for the memory.

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