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bklynboy
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0 posted 2003-04-30 09:40 PM



rain pours at sundown
colors taken from the sky
becoming rainbows

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Startime55
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1 posted 2003-04-30 09:46 PM


What a lovely vision you create with so few words...I really enjoyed seeing this poem...

regards2you
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2 posted 2003-05-01 09:05 AM


I think this beautiful. The colors from  the sky, so true. The first line, I see double meanings and I had to think about it ....but,  yes,  when the sun sets there is an array of colors....

Nice,

Enjoyed,

Hugs, Pat

  

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Margherita
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3 posted 2003-05-01 09:11 AM


Very lovely! Whenever sun and rain mix ... there this incredible miracle performs.
And you see your love with these colors, beautiful!
Love, Margherita

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2003-05-01 09:25 AM


Calming, colorful...simply lovely!

Warm hugs,
EA

Justbleu
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5 posted 2003-05-01 11:29 AM


A beautiful haiku....
I want to see more of these from you!!!!
Very nice!!!!
Bridgette

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Aenimal
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6 posted 2003-05-01 12:24 PM


Very nice..now I got the Stones song in my head..
bklynboy
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7 posted 2003-05-01 08:59 PM


Aenimal...you got it. Great song and thanks everyone for the kind words. Its really appreciated!
littlewing
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8 posted 2003-05-02 06:20 PM


Beautiful job BB

is nice to see you flying through here

*now I have to go listen . . . *

xxoo

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2003-05-02 06:22 PM


very pretty

M

kitkat
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10 posted 2003-05-03 12:22 PM


very nice  I enjoy your haikus

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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
11 posted 2003-05-03 12:29 PM


yeah from those first few notes on the piano..my favourite stones song next to 2000 light years from home..well and all of Exile on mainstreet

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (05-03-2003 05:18 PM).]

j0n4th4n
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12 posted 2003-05-03 06:51 AM


wonderful!
ThisDiamond
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13 posted 2003-05-03 09:16 AM


What a good vision here!
A concentrate of spring I think. TD

Honeybee
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14 posted 2003-05-03 03:36 PM



You've captured it so well...beautiful!

Melissa~

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Chanson
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
15 posted 2003-05-03 07:42 PM


So pretty!
Kethry
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16 posted 2003-05-03 08:52 PM


bklynboy,
I too thought of the Stones song, but thought your haiku describes it so much better.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



bklynboy
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17 posted 2003-05-04 06:43 PM


Thanks everyone for the comments. I gotta buy a bigger hat now to play golf in. I really appreciate the support!
inkedgoddess
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18 posted 2003-06-06 12:24 PM


you are doing this form of poetry well, nice haiku
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