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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-04-30 09:39 PM




Passioned
~*Marge Tindal*~

~Passioned
Soft glow of you
Cloaks me … embered adorn
Passionate breath exhaled from you
Quilts me in heated coverlet of love
Joined in this moment of adore
Totally consuming ………
Breathing deeply
Passioned~
Giving my all
Receiving in return
More than received ever before
You smile into my eyes with new wanting
Knowing that my desire rises
To meet your fulfillment
Yes, once again
Passioned~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Startime55
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1 posted 2003-04-30 09:45 PM


Sizzling with a passion that keeps on growing...I love the heat of this wonderful poem...

Suetang
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2 posted 2003-04-30 11:01 PM


Hello Marge

How nice to see you here again.  This was absolutely exquisite and brimming with love and passion.

"Romance thrives on love
and produces an abundance of blooms
filled with passion and desire"

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-05-08 10:50 AM


Thanks, gals~
Ahhhhhhhh, the romance of it all~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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4 posted 2003-05-18 08:12 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my soul and bringer of the mornings song what can I say but this is utterly utterly fabulous. Its too bad of you darling one to write so well when you know I cannot write a word right now. Truly exquisite darling heart. Isn’t it a good job I love you so forgive you for being such a wonderful writer. And yes you knew I’d say that.


Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

ethome
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5 posted 2003-05-18 08:57 PM


Whew this is hot stuff Marge.......In a very deep and love connected way it's a real flame broiler.
You're a s good as ever!

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6 posted 2003-05-18 09:51 PM


fantastic!

The emotion is raw and unfiltered.  Very enjoyable. Well done.

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7 posted 2003-05-18 09:56 PM


AWESOME! TD
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8 posted 2003-05-19 05:01 AM


ooooooo! very hot! nicely done!
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9 posted 2003-05-19 06:36 AM


Hey Marge,  
I don't know how I missed this the first
time around. I sure am glad that I didn't
miss it this time.
Hugs,
Ethel

Nan
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10 posted 2003-05-19 07:13 AM


What a wonderful word to build poetry upon, don'tcha think??.. Yep you do - You did...
Kethry
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11 posted 2003-05-19 09:34 PM


Passionate and impassioned and very, VERY loving.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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12 posted 2003-05-19 09:39 PM


Marge T.  a very romantic and warming poem
of love and passion.  Thanx.

Martie
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13 posted 2003-05-19 10:00 PM


Marge/sis...Yes, indeed you are, Passioned!


Saunni
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14 posted 2003-05-19 11:19 PM


Aww, Marge, this is so very beautiful! I loved this.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

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15 posted 2003-05-20 08:38 PM


...if it could only be like this always. When it is, if it is, paradise....

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jwesley
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16 posted 2003-05-20 08:40 PM


Passioned indeed, my friend...the heat literally rises from this...

jwesley

RobertB
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17 posted 2003-05-20 09:03 PM


you are so good
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18 posted 2003-05-20 09:24 PM


~someday I hope to feel this way again~


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19 posted 2003-05-20 09:24 PM


loved it
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20 posted 2003-05-20 11:58 PM


Marge,

"You smile into my eyes with new wanting"

love it.

SG

Marge Tindal
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21 posted 2003-05-22 07:53 PM


Friends~
I greatly appreciate each kind reply~

You all make it easy to want to continue sharing~

MarshaLove~
THANK YOU for sending Bev to dig it out of the back pages of plummet~

ETHome~
Tee-Hee ... that's what 'he' says too~

Aran~
Thank you very much.

ThisDiamond~
I so appreciate you~

Dixie~


Ethel~
Me too~  Thank you~

Nan~
*smiling* at you~

Kethry~
Awwwwwwww ... thankee gal~

Magnus~
So greatly I appreciate you stopping in for a read~

MartieSis~
Awwwwwww ... you're just the nicest sis in town~

Saunni~
Thanks gal ... so good to see you~

Ed~
It IS ... isn't it ???

JWesley~
I'm glad to know you like it~

RobertB~
*smiles* from this corner~
Thank you so very much for coming in on this one and for your 'feel-good' comment !!

WynterGal~
You will ... oh, you will~

VanDana~
Thank you dear~

SimplyGold~
Thank you ... my favorite part too !!
*Huglets* to all~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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