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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-04-30 07:48 PM



~*~

Lurking shadows follow closely
Casting darkness on the light
Waiting for the chance to take you
To lost worlds of darkest night

Heaven's angels cannot save you
If you sink to depths of hell
Fire, brimstone, sulfur gases
Would be the home in which you'd dwell

Shun the shadows, seek the sunshine
Live your life by Golden Rule
Treat fellow man with love and kindness
As you'd have him do unto you

~*~

© Copyright 2003 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-04-30 07:59 PM


Linda, interesting words here. Yes, we should always at least try to follow the golden rule. If not....the world would be living hell. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2003-04-30 08:11 PM


A strong and to the point little verse EA...good thoughts to put into practice.
TD

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3 posted 2003-04-30 09:01 PM


Earth Angel
Now you tell me...LOL enjoyed the read.


Jason Lyle
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4 posted 2003-04-30 09:34 PM


Enjoyed this cool write and universally great lesson.
Jason

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5 posted 2003-04-30 09:37 PM


Well said...very well said...this poem sings ancient wisdom...I love it...

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6 posted 2003-04-30 10:14 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Linda, I agree with all my heart, I just want everyone to be happy and want to teach as many children as I can the meaning of Love and the Golden Rule so they can grow with peace at heart and bring hope to the future! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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7 posted 2003-05-01 12:17 PM


shun the shadows
hang onto the light...
unless of course those shadows
are just reflecting reality
off of Midnite's flashlight


just me, forever playing devils advocate
or
the court jester perhaps?

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8 posted 2003-05-01 12:29 PM


Shun the shadows, seek the sunshine...awesome line here!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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9 posted 2003-05-02 10:31 AM


Some of those shadows are pretty efficient lurkers... and finding the sunshine with them wrapped around your ankles is worse than dragging a ball and chain. *S*

I liked this very much, EA... wise advice. *S*

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10 posted 2003-05-02 10:37 AM



Amazing, that when things
become darkest, we not only
stretch for the light,
but for the words, as well...

Enjoyed this, EA...

very much.

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2003-05-02 12:02 PM


Chris ~

Yes!--and if more people followed the Goden Rule, life would be a living heaven!

Thank you for your thoughtful reply!

Spring showers, and flowers, and sunshine,
Linda

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12 posted 2003-05-02 12:04 PM


TD ~

Thank you, TD!--and I'll bet you are one who puts such thoughts into practice!

~ May your day bring new treasures!

Linda

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13 posted 2003-05-02 12:05 PM


Mr. T. ~

Oh, you're just pulling my wing! You already knew the Golden Rule! Aren't you the one who came up with it in the first place?!?

Luvya bunches!
EA

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14 posted 2003-05-02 12:06 PM


Jason ~

I'm am so pleased that you did enjoy it--and for saying so!

~ Go and and make this day a real good one!

Linda

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15 posted 2003-05-02 12:08 PM


Startime ~

curtsies!

~ May the blessings of the stars forever shine down on you at night...

EA

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16 posted 2003-05-02 12:11 PM


Noah ~

--and ye shall do just that! You will bring joy to children and teach them the universal truths so that they may grow into fine young adults such as ye be.

~ May your reality be a reflection of your aspiring dreams...

Love & Hugs,
EA

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17 posted 2003-05-02 12:14 PM


Midnitesun ~

I like the tiny little pic of you with those tiny little horns! You are "jest" soooo funny!

~ May all your questions be answered--and may all your answers be questioned!

EA

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18 posted 2003-05-02 12:14 PM



If you follow the Light...

...the shadows shall stay behind...

Nicely done.

CG

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19 posted 2003-05-02 12:16 PM


KoKo ~

Thank you, Dear KoKo!

~ May the joy of living be with you always...

EA

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20 posted 2003-05-02 12:18 PM


Heaven's angels cannot save you
If you sink to depths of hell
Fire, brimstone, sulfur gases
Would be the home in which you'd dwell


Yeah, I've heard often enough this advice that no power on earth can save you, unless you do something to save yourself.

But a question here, is 'sulfur' the same as 'sulphur'?

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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21 posted 2003-05-02 12:21 PM


Suthern Belle ~

My goodness! You certainly created quite the visual with your reply! Let me know if there is anything that I can do to get those beasties away from your ankles! I do have a magic wand, you know!

~ May the sunshine banish all darkness in your life!

Lovin' hugs,
EA


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22 posted 2003-05-02 12:22 PM


Elan ~

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for the kind response you made to my own!

~ May the sun, the moon, and the stars light your path in life...

EA

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23 posted 2003-05-02 12:25 PM


CastleGuard ~

Like your name! It reminds me of the game of chess--which I LOVE to play!

I enjoyed your thoughts on my poem! Thank you!

~ May you always be safe and in good keep...

EA

Earth Angel
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24 posted 2003-05-02 12:32 PM


Mon Cherie ~

I heard enough of the fire and brimstone stuff myself when I was growing up. I am not of that belief anymore! --But it scared me so much, that I did my best to be very, very good little "angel"! Now, I sin all I want!--Just jokin'! LOL

"Sulphur" can be spelled both ways. "Sulfur" is the American way and the other is the British.

~ May love and beauty grace all the days of your life...

EA

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25 posted 2003-05-02 12:52 PM




Linda,

Ms. Wisdom, herself. Sorry, I missed this earlier...was doing battle with darkness, or least, someone else's...sometimes effects us as much as our own..

I so aprreciate you loving kindness to, may I help pass it along....

Hugs, You, great write... Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Earth Angel
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26 posted 2003-05-02 01:01 PM


Pat ~

Yes, please do! --and thank you for sharing your thoughts. Mine are with you!

~ May the glorious rays of Divine Light, cast all darkness from the paths of you and your loved ones...

Loving hugs,
Linda xo

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