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Tell me you remember
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Tell me you remember |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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Tell me you still remember Life before We grew too old Sitting on the back porch Predicting love With daisy petals Crying on not Proclaiming love To some helpless soul With a very bad written letter Signed with half a dozen X's and O's In red magic marker. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely thought and written.  |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you! |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Brad...Very whimsical look at the days of yore and the meaning in these past memories. Liked your style very much. ***Ivy Rose |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Brad...I remember those days....love was different then, but not better. Enjoyed this! |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Indeed I do remember when... enjoyed this. Sunkissed. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Grin... Cleverly descript Brad...really liked the red magic marker...I guess I still remember TD |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is sweet Brad. Makes me grin, too. Really like it. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Brad, I haven't gotten to hold loves hand at all yet but when I do I want tonsavor every moment and I believe always loving like you just fell in love is a blessing! (smiles) This is a gem, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brad, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Brad...*soft smile* Much enjoyed! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Yes, I remember. And I remember sitting crossed legged slouched over a crumpled note "Do you love me?" Yes or No Thanks for taking me back. quatro |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Oooooh!!! I love this so much!!!!! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The red magic marker does it...  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Brad this just caused my heart to slightly tremble ...  Sweet and melancholic memories .... Love, Margherita |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is very well-written! And yes, I still remember. In fact it's not too long ago when I did this  Sitting on the back porch Predicting love With daisy petals Crying on not Proclaiming love To some helpless soul _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh wow...yeah |
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