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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2003-04-30 12:01 PM


Re-posted as requested by my dearest friend, Ms. Doyle (Paloma de Paz) and dedicated to the youth of the world, encouraging them all to dance to the music of life!



Grace
By: Noah Eaton
1/24/02

I approach the bright lights at ease
Mothers speaking in my lungs, my father through my throat
All my colleagues are lined up like militia
Watch, because between the lines
I'm going to be making waves
Juxtaposing my blessings in this diocese
And I will be the vicar forene and convert all my fears

Oh, strum my heart like a tuning fork
Start me up and I'll show you what this is all for
Via media, up above, doesn't matter where I go
Wait until I start up the show
I'm not crazy, I'm just feeling feisty
But I have a right to be once in a while
So let me shake my tambourine!

I'll shake it up
I'll tune it up
So turn it up
I'm the graceful one!



Moth, come and dance with this flame
Play by ear, need not pay for this telephone exchange
Insert your coins to begin this cycle
It's you, me, and the music
Here where yield signs are forbidden on my avenues
Watch as my legs dissolve like tapioca
Repel these tidal waves of metaphors and paint in tempera
Be temerarious, vibrate, vibrate, tuck your masks away
Would you give anything to be
Would you give anything to be?

From my toes
To my knees
To my chest
And onto my heart
I'm astonished by this beat
Cellophane wits and silicone pursuits
Solecism one may say, but independence to another
Just behold my somatology
Just behold how I can move with God!

I'll shake it up
I'll tune it up
So turn it up
I'm the graceful one!



Sirens used to blind me, the darkness became my exorcist
I used to cry a river and live my life like a mad scientist
But now I'll be the sommelier, the guest of honor
Shilly-shally becomes shimmy when you vacillate
You thought your image was Neapolitan ice cream
You're everything, so rise to the podium and sing
You're the architect, the spitting image
The time is now, so let's get to business

Some may say I'm selling my soul, but I'm only artistic
Drink your ambrosia, assemble your seance
Order a search warrant for any of the music in you
Rock on, rock lobster, make a replevin
Release the music in your soul, let it all out
Bury yourself in the power ballad, sweet songbird
You've got hands, you've got soul
You've got hips that reverberate the living word
Shake it up, shake it up, shake it up
Shake it up, let your manifesto be accented out loud...

I'll shake it up
I'll tune it up
So turn it up
I'm the graceful one!
I'll shake it up
You know, you know I will
I'll tune it up
Dance with me now
So turn it up
You know, you know I will
I'm the graceful one!

"You are the music while the music lasts"
And "the high note is not the only thing"
So turn it up with God's liaison
Be the graceful one!

Be temerarious, tuck your masks away
Would you give anything to be
Would you give anything to be?
Embrace Grace, embrace...



Quoted lines in respect to T.S Elliot & Placido Domingo


Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-30-2003 12:02 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-04-30 08:41 AM


This post has something for everyone! It's dy-no-mite! A treat for the eyes, heart and soul---and the mind! Your brilliance shines through this delectable feast of savory words!

May your day be a joyous one!

Warm, sunny hugs,
Linda


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2 posted 2003-04-30 08:55 AM


Noah this just takes my breath away.
If this doesn't want to make ya get up and dance then I don't know what will!!
Amazing write with wonderful pictures!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2003-04-30 09:36 AM


From my toes
To my knees
To my chest
And onto my heart

Powerful words and message here Noah. Excuse me now while I get up and shake my groove thing. lol. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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4 posted 2003-04-30 09:44 AM


Noah,
To fast for me I dance at a slower pace now.
LOL beautiful pics and write.

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5 posted 2003-04-30 09:48 AM


"You are the music while the music lasts"


Noah, I love this poem. I agree that it has
something in it for everyone!!  Very good, friend.
Hugs  
Ethel

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6 posted 2003-04-30 12:23 PM


that's quite a "mouth-full" to "chew on" all at once.
it does flow well and presents good images, even without the pictures

Gnub

there ain't no lovin'
like Gnub Gnubbin's lovin'

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-04-30 03:56 PM


Enjoyed...James
quatro
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8 posted 2003-04-30 05:14 PM


Outstanding!  I think I will go and shake my tamorine now.

quatro

carol
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9 posted 2003-05-01 12:03 PM


Noah,very nice

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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10 posted 2003-05-01 09:59 AM


Wow Noah!! It's been such a long time since I last read something you wrote... Not your fault though, coz I was the absent one... hehe

This one is really cool and funky! Can just imagine being at a gig and watching the band strum their guitars and drum their percussions. COOL!!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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11 posted 2003-05-01 07:15 PM


Wonderful Noah!
Eric

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12 posted 2003-05-01 07:38 PM


Words designed to make the heart want to dance....Beautiful, Noah...

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13 posted 2003-05-02 08:03 PM


enjoy your read hugs
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