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Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2003-04-29 10:16 PM



I want to be that bubble that
bounces in your bath
brushing up against your legs
gliding and sliding to the back
and across your shoulder blades

I want you to blow me into
the air and watch
as I float down to your skin
I want to be your calgon
that takes you away

Even though all bubbles
must break up and drain
at least this soapy suds will be able to say
I saw heaven before I floated away



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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
1 posted 2003-04-29 10:20 PM


"Even though all bubbles
must break up and drain
at least this soapy suds will be able to say
I saw heaven before I floated away"
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lol..I like

hugs, g

"If you suppress laughter, it goes down and spreads out your hips."- Steve Allen

poetSeaMaiden
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since 2003-04-25
Posts 107

2 posted 2003-04-29 10:39 PM


Well, OH MY GOODNESS, now I'm going to wonder if all my bubbles are LOOKING at me in the bathtub!   I think you just permanently scarred me!     

Just kidding of course - this is beautifully romantic, and of course I'm a perv, so I found it kind of sexy and silly too! You sure have one lucky lady! Geesh, for a man to write something like this about me in the tub, I'd just squeal!   Superb and creative idea here!  MORE MORE!!

~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see.  ~ PoetSeaMaiden

poetSeaMaiden
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since 2003-04-25
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3 posted 2003-04-29 10:42 PM


Okay, I read this again with my head OUT of the gutter, and yes, I have decided that this is sweetly romantic, and SOMEWHAT sexy, not naughty.   Wow, the more I read it, the more I like it!  ** peeking under my bathroom sink to make sure I have some bubbles for later! **

~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see.  ~ PoetSeaMaiden

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 2003-04-30 10:03 AM


Very creative write....
Nice!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)
5 posted 2003-04-30 11:05 AM


Your comments make me all bubbly inside
LOL
Thank you
The response I wanted I got

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