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Suetang
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0 posted 2003-04-29 08:02 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

* * *

I drift upon a sea of sorrow
I'm lost in my loneliness
But I am comforted by nature
And feel the waves soft caress

I see a ship out in the distance
And I am drawn to its light
The dolphins help to guide me
As the day turns into night

The seas begin to calm
As the moon comes into view
And as I reach the vessel
I am in total awe of you

I toss my troubles to the wind
As you take me in your arms
And as the moon shines like a beacon
I surrender to your charms

As we dive together recklessly
Into this sensual sea
You explore my hidden treasure
And become a part of me

* * *

"If I never met him
I would have dreamed
him into being"


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-04-29 08:09 PM


Lovely thoughts and pic Sue - enjoyed this to-night very much. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2003-04-29 08:58 PM


Suetang - you write with romance in your heart, I can tell...

BC

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3 posted 2003-04-29 10:46 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, love hope sall things as the great proverb says and I truly wish for true happiness to always singin you and bring you clear sailing from here! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

poetSeaMaiden
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4 posted 2003-04-30 12:25 PM


Oh Geez - you almost made me believe in fairy tale love again with this piece. I say ALMOST! LOL!  Gorgeous picture to go with this, as usual!  Such a breathtaking poem, I couldn't read it fast enough to find out what HAPPENED at the end!  Just the way I like them - good enough to make me *sigh*...

A beautiful way to end my night! THANKS!

~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see.  ~ PoetSeaMaiden

NewEnglandlazurlu
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5 posted 2003-04-30 03:13 PM


I want to come for a ride in your chariot!!

I've never met anyone with so much love in the heart and soul. You are truly amazing and this was truly beautiful.

Hugs, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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6 posted 2003-04-30 04:03 PM


Sue:  Beautiflly romantic and fanciful!

Betty Lou Hebert

quatro
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7 posted 2003-04-30 05:10 PM


I really, really, really enjoyed this!  I am left speechless....

quatro

Lost_Soul
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8 posted 2003-05-03 05:52 PM


This is wonderful. It left me speechless. thank you so much for sharing this with us.
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