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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-04-29 07:54 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

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Would you like to come and fly
In my brightly colored balloon
We'll pass the world on by
As we drift towards the moon

We'll glide just like the birds
In our basket made for two
We feel so close to heaven
As we admire this stunning view

We'll land softly in the meadow
Upon the grass so lush and green
As we lay back and remember
All the sights we have seen

I'll feed you grapes and strawberries
Until the cows come wandering home
The we'll climb aboard our basket
As the warm winds carry us home

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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1 posted 2003-04-29 08:14 PM


this write i really enjoyied it has so many nice thoughts,  

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
2 posted 2003-04-30 03:14 PM


Hi Sue,

Would you like to come and fly
In my brightly colored balloon


I would be honored. Can we fly over the Great Barrier Reef?  

Hugs for a wonderful poem.    Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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3 posted 2003-04-30 03:45 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your gorgeous words do! (kiss on cheek) yay, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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Member Patricius
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4 posted 2003-04-30 04:05 PM


Sue:  Sounds like a wonderful trip!  

Betty Lou Hebert

edh
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since 2003-03-26
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5 posted 2003-04-30 04:57 PM


Would you like to fly in my beautiful baloon.  Way up in the sky.  In my beautiful baloon.  Oh we can fly the friendly skys together.  You and I.  Oh we can fly.

Up Up and away.  In my beautiful.  My beautiful baloon.

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