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scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

0 posted 2003-04-29 06:51 PM

Unlocked

You need a tender loving touch
For you to open like a flower.
Others have not cared that much
To see your passion's power.

I know you need only tenderness
To unlock your sensual soul.
So I lovingly let each soft caress
Linger gently to make you whole.

For you are truly a treasure
I promise to love forever.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2003-04-29 07:07 PM

b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l ...h

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-04-29 07:13 PM

Scorpio, well just look at this!
Such a beautiful verse for a very lucky lady..
and what a lovely Calla Lily picture!
Wonderful piece of work here...breathtaking & exquisite.
A keeper for my library!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before. ~

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

3 posted 2003-04-29 07:14 PM

scorpio, a great poem

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-04-29 08:03 PM

(smiles) And you certainly are the morning dew to her that will nurture and make all the flowers in her heart bud in due time! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, keep blessing with the hyacinths, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2003-04-29 08:07 PM

Very tender and soft. Love it. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

6 posted 2003-04-29 08:32 PM

Thank you Helen...Glad you enjoyed this..

Nancy, I'm the lucky one...she's simply to good for me...I'm glad you liked the lily...I thought you might *S*..

Thank you Carol...you're very kind..

Noah..thank you..I do my best to make my love happy..

Chris, I appreciate your kind support...thank you..

believe in what your heart feels...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-04-29 09:21 PM

I do not know
who is more fortunate...
you,
or her...

or us.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2003-04-29 09:30 PM

So delicately written...like the linger on soft skin. Wonderful. TD

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

9 posted 2003-04-29 09:35 PM

interesting!!

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2003-04-29 09:35 PM

scorpio - written from the heart for sure. Great romantic write...

BC

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2003-04-29 09:43 PM

A promise from a loving and loyal heart such as yours, is indeed a promise forever...

Lovely.

Love & Light,
EA

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2003-04-29 11:36 PM

Scorpio, this is so beautiful. It
sounds a lot like the ones my
Love writes for me. I love the
flower, too. Very pretty. I know your
Love likes for you to write poems
for her.

Hugs,
Ethel

poetSeaMaiden
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 107

13 posted 2003-04-30 12:09 PM

Geeze Louise, someone sure is lucky to have you writing little love verses like these for them! *sighs* Simply beautiful to say the least!

~ Poets cry with words, not always tears, you see. ~ PoetSeaMaiden

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

14 posted 2003-04-30 08:38 AM

Thank you Karilea...I do appreciate your kind support very much..

Lingering is good, ThisDiamond...thank you..

Thank you QjQ..

Yes Bill...it came from the heart which is always the best place to start..thanks..

Ethel, I'm glad Gary writes for you too..

It is forever, Linda...thank you for your comments..

Thank you poetSeaMaiden...I'm the lucky one..

believe in what your heart feels...

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