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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-04-29 03:25 PM


              Endless slumber
                  eternal sleep
            now I live from dream to dream
              and reality the nightmare
                  I must endure
               till sleep embraces me
                   once more
          then I am awakened from blissful sleep
               by an infernal knocking
                  on my door
              why must they bother me?
           when they know I have no intention
                of leaving the safety
                 of my warm bed
                 I close my eyes
                and pretend to sleep
                 hoping he will tire
                  and go away
              but he continues to knock
                 again and again
                 louder and louder
              never allowing me to fall
                 into deep sleep
               I've always wondered
                 who? or why?
              but its easier not to care
                   and live
                 dream to dream

[This message has been edited by Brad Majors (04-29-2003 03:26 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-04-29 04:19 PM


It is isnt it....easier to live dream to dream.....I prefer that until reality knocks me back.....thought provoking this is....



Lauren~


Through the darkness
I can see your light
And you will always shine
And I can feel your heart in mine

I will remember you

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-29-2003 04:22 PM).]

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-04-29 04:33 PM


thank you
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-04-29 05:56 PM


live dream to dream...wish I could *s
hugssss
M

quatro
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4 posted 2003-04-29 06:15 PM


To dream a little dream. A very welcoming thought.

quatro

Thomas119gold
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5 posted 2003-04-29 06:35 PM


Great write I read alot of your writings and this one caught me off guard
I will have to read it again and see why.


Thomas119gold
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6 posted 2003-04-29 06:36 PM


Oh yeah sounds like you described me in the morning. LOL
I really did enjoy the poem

carol
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7 posted 2003-04-29 07:18 PM


Brad, great write it reminds me of myself in the mornings

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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