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Rhythm of Hearts

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QjQ
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since 04-18-2003
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0 posted 04-29-2003 12:43 PM       View Profile for QjQ   Email QjQ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for QjQ

Our hearts were out of tune with only
thoughts of singing like the birds.
And then our thoughts came together
by a mystic song of music.
The tunes were sweet and the rhythm,
we entwined together.
Our hearts danced to a new tune of
music that had been dormant.
As we danced, the days and the weeks
became months.
We believed our hearts had found the
right tune.
The expressions of your face glowed
like a full moon.
The twinkle from your eyes was like
magic from the night sky.
Your hair flowed in the gentle breeze,
like a flowing stream rippling along
the path we strolled.
Now, our hearts are dancing to the
rhythm of love.

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BluesSerenade
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since 10-23-2001
Posts 9867
By the Seaside


1 posted 04-29-2003 12:49 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

I liked the rippling effect!
So pretty, this path you're on.
Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska


2 posted 04-29-2003 01:41 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

A line from a poem of mine....
"A step in step in time with mine"
That's what it reminds me of!!!!
Very nice....I'm a hopeless romantic and eat these love poems up!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Suetang
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since 03-07-2001
Posts 5275
Melbourne, Australia


3 posted 04-29-2003 08:21 PM       View Profile for Suetang   Email Suetang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suetang

Yet another beautiful piece of writing that was so much enjoyed.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

JilGirl
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since 05-24-2003
Posts 455
Washington


4 posted 05-29-2003 07:36 PM       View Profile for JilGirl   Email JilGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JilGirl

Don't know HOW I could have missed this one! It is delightfully romantic! Very special!

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

carol
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since 01-25-2003
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5 posted 05-29-2003 08:16 PM       View Profile for carol   Email carol   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit carol's Home Page   View IP for carol

QjQ,such beautiful work it is a great love poem

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

whiskey
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6 posted 05-29-2003 09:14 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Lovely romantic piece, So beautiful and full of emotion


Julie
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displaced


7 posted 05-30-2003 04:13 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

swaying...
Mystic One
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since 09-14-2003
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8 posted 01-17-2004 01:48 PM       View Profile for Mystic One   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystic One

Terrific!!!!
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