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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-04-29 10:55 AM



The Cowards Way Out

Your times of silence
That left me in doubt
Maybe you are using
The cowards way out

In avoiding questions
Always evading reply
Deceitful are cunning
Being gutless and sly

In  grovelling excuses
The user often returns
Only  you could know  
My heart often yearns

Heart left open ended
My mind going insane
The reason of silence
May I ask once again

Having me convinced
His words persuasive
I should have realised
Liars remain evasive  

HopeĀ©2003

© Copyright 2003 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
regards2you
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1 posted 2003-04-29 10:59 AM



Hope,

Of course the last line says it all.

Lots of unspoken feelings here.

Good write.
Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

HopeS
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2 posted 2003-04-29 11:04 AM


thank you Pat , by writing it down , it did help relieve a little of the hurt I was feeling
Hope

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2003-04-29 11:11 AM


Very powerful writing Hope~

I could go on and on but I won't.

Nice venting~

RSWells
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4 posted 2003-04-29 11:14 AM


The bitter bite of the bitten. We'd have little to write of elsewise no? A five slap stanza form. Enjoyed.
QjQ
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5 posted 2003-04-29 10:07 PM


true liers do harm!!

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2003-04-29 10:12 PM


HopeS - a liar is very evasive, you've said it all well...

BC

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