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zenny
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since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2003-04-29 10:38 AM

Take my hand

Take my hand and follow me
I'll guide us through the day
We'll walk around and all can see
This feeling we obey

We can try to touch the rays of sun
but lets stop and take deep breath
Hold me close, I love you hun
Our future lies ahead

© Copyright 2003 Kelly Verbeeck - All Rights Reserved

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2003-04-29 11:11 AM

"This feeling we obey"

I like that line....

haven't seen you around lately..

Nice pictures, too. along with this sweet poem.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

2 posted 2003-04-29 11:20 AM

thanks for replying regards2you

You're right, i haven't been here for a while, lets say.. my muse was taking a break

I love being back here though
Hugs,
Zenny

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-04-29 01:05 PM

Sounds like you have a lot to look forward to.

Nice poem and pictures!

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

4 posted 2003-04-29 01:34 PM

This is wonderful.....
I'm happy for you!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-04-29 10:10 PM

good write

Lost_Soul
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since 2003-04-17

Posts 37
California, United States

6 posted 2003-05-03 05:34 PM

Very good. Lots of feeling.

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